Continuing with my fantasy romance WIP. Benim sizing up his captive...
He held his breath waiting to see what she’d come up with next but rather than continue the argument, she lay down beside him…as far away as she could get. The chain tugged at his wrist and he shifted his arm to allow her as much comfort as he could.
When she rolled onto her side, facing him, he glanced her way. Already her eyes were closed, lashes dark against her pale skin, darker than the gold-brown shade of her hair. A small straight nose. Her lower lip was shorter than her upper one but temptingly plump.
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13 comments:
Nice to see she's got his attention in all the right ways too. Great 6! Have a wonderful Christmas, Eleri.
absolutely fabulous descriptions... I was right there with him, seeing what he saw. Excellent six.
Love how he sees and describes her.
Terrific description, vivid and clear, so I could see everything. I'm very intrigued by this one. Great six!
Great descriptions! I could see the scene.
I love how personal and intimate this description is. Wonderful six1
He's starting to see her as a person--and a woman. That's good! :D
I love your descriptions. Well done!
I like his small effort of kindness when it came to the chain. Good six, Eleri. :)
Oh, he's in trouble that close to her. It's only a matter of time. ;) Great six!
I like him a LOT, can't wait to read more - great six!
Love the description! Definitely trouble abrew, LOL!
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